Reading research has
demonstrated the importance of text structure in written communication,
and in the application of specific cognitive strategies to enhance
understanding of text (Boyle, 1996; Calfee, Chambliss, & Beretz,
1991). Attention to text structure can orient students towards an
awareness of the "building blocks" that writers use in
creating the text, and thus facilitate an understanding of it for
comprehending and composing. This conceptual approach to teaching
reading comprehension and composition is pertinent to both narrative
and expository texts, but it lends itself particularly well to
application with narratives because of the commonality and predictability
of elements that authors must use in designing a good story (Lukens,
1999).
Research has shown that an understanding of text structure is critical
in aiding reading comprehension (Pearson & Camperell, 1985).
In addition, schema theory has highlighted the fact that there is
often more than one possible interpretation of text depending on
specific cultural and other related factors that emerge from the
reader's background (Anderson, 1985). These kinds of insights should
inform the knowledge base for teachers in K-12 classrooms engaged
in teaching students to appreciate narratives. On the contrary,
however, research studies indicate that methods in the teaching
of both narrative and expository reading comprehension have evolved
from a simplistic "reading-to-learn" perspective (Fisher,
Cox, & Paille 1996; p. 410), instead of an approach grounded
in the fundamentals of text design.
In an effort to stem the kind of disjointed and piecemeal approach
to the teaching of literature texts practiced in many classrooms
(Darling-Hammond, 2000; Rickford 2002), the California State Department
of Education has produced a blueprint for the teaching of reading
comprehension, endorsing research-based approaches. The California
Language Arts Framework (1999) cites "text structure (p.20)
as one of the key components in teaching narratives and reading
comprehension, and states that it is important for students to learn
"the structural features of narrative text" (p. 25) and
also understand the "commonalities in narrative text"
(p. 25) when studying stories. Similarly, the Blue-Page English-Language
Arts Content Standards for first through eighth grade consistently
recommend attention to "structural features" and/or "literary
elements", and "narrative analysis of grade-level appropriate
text" (p. 78) in the study of narratives at every step from
Kindergarten through Grade 12 (1999; pp. 62, 78, 93, 115, 129-30,
146-47, 162 & 177). The document also asserts that "the
elements of 'story grammar'"--a constituent of structure--can
be used as a framework for beginning to teach higher-level comprehension
skills (p. 34).
The recommendation to promote the structural analysis of narratives
as an avenue for teaching comprehension is a move in the right
direction. As Bruner observed almost half a century ago, "Knowledge one
has acquired without sufficient structure to tie it together is
knowledge that is likely to be forgotten...an unconnected set of
facts has a pitiably short half-life in memory (Bruner, 1960; p.
31). And as Wiggins & Mc Tighe pointed out more recently, understanding
must of necessity take place "by design" (Wiggins & Mc
Tighe 1998). In the unit that follows, I will propose that the
explicit attention to the concrete structural components of narratives,
and to authors' manipulation of them in designing stories, can
provide essential scaffolding to aid in students' understanding
of narrative text, and in its critique and analysis. These components
are identified in this module as the primary elements of character,
theme, plot, and setting, in addition to the secondary (yet important)
sub-elements such as problems, solutions, actions, and emotions.
IMPORTANT CONCEPTS FOR NARRATIVE APPRECIATION
(These concepts are highlighted in the following discussion)
Physical structure
Mental structure or Schema
What happens when Variation occurs
Culturally Congruent Literature
Importance of "The Canon"
Comprehension as Reconstruction
More Similarities than differences--Life Cycles and Cosmic Rhythms
Rickford's Narrative Map
Samuel T. Coleridge (1772-1834): The Willing Suspension of Disbelief
As mentioned in the preceding introduction, the physical structure
or grammar of a story is important to understanding how an author
puts a story together, an insight which in turn helps a student
when composing or critiquing a story. The reader's mental structure
or schema is the material in our heads and hearts that has originated
from our experience in the world. As we live, we interact with people
and with the world, and it is our reactions to these experiences,
and our interpretations of them that are organized and stored, and
become our schemata that influence the way we interact with and
comprehend literature. The concept of "physical structure"
is therefore text-based, while the concept of "mental structure"
is reader-based. But both phenomena impact our comprehension and
composition of narrative text, and contribute to variation in the
way we interpret text. In addition, our cultural propensities also
affect text interpretation and analysis. Therefore students enjoy
reading culturally congruent literature texts that contain themes,
ideas, characters, and events which reflect their own life experiences,
and with which they can readily relate. Thus, although traditional
works of the literary canon such as Shakespeare and Hemingway are
important, teachers should also ensure balance in students' literary
diet by including culture-based narratives.
Comprehension and composition are so inter-related that one researcher
suggests that we might more accurately refer to comprehension as
reconstruction (The Book, Calfee/Stanford, 1992). A writer fashions
a passage according to a plan reflecting his or her particular purpose,
knowledge and imagination. Then the reader's task is to recreate
a mental image that captures the writer's efforts. The two images
will seldom be identical, he contends, because reader and writer
interpret the same information somewhat differently. In general,
however, the aim is to achieve a fairly close correspondence between
the writer's thoughts and the reader's understanding. At its core,
therefore, the act of comprehension is a process of communication,
of "mind touching" in which two individuals share a structure
of ideas sculpted by art and craft. Comprehension is therefore closely
linked to composition. The student who learns strategies for comprehending
narratives will similarly grasp the techniques required for composition.
Like communication, it is a two-way street.
Because novels, narratives, and short stories share more similarities
than differences, we can devise some common cognitive strategies
for their comprehension and composition (see the concept of Narrative
Map, an heuristic for narrative segmentation and analysis in Rickford,
1999). For example, most stories are built around our life cycles--birth,
challenges and problems, death, rebirth and regeneration--and cosmic
rhythms--day and night, the seasons of the year, natural phenomena,
and so on. And because the imagination plays an important role in
the creation of stories, our appreciation of narratives often involves
"the willing suspension of belief," a concept that emerged
with the nineteenth century writer and poet Samuel T. Coleridge.
In what follows, students will be introduced to four cognitive structures
that serve as a scaffold for comprehending and composing narratives:
the Conceptual Map, the Character Weave, the Story Graph, and the
Episodic Analysis Chart. Each of these structures provides a blueprint
for students to use in appreciating, analyzing, comprehending, and
composing narratives. They are based on Robert Calfee's work with
teachers and students at Stanford University more than a decade
ago. Three of these structures--the Conceptual Map, the Character
Weave, and the Episodic Analysis Chart--are presented below for
demonstration purposes. They have been built from a short story
entitled "The Woman and the Tree Children" by Julius Lester,
which is also included below for purposes of clarity in demonstrating
the function and usefulness of the strategies.
The Story Graph is not demonstrated, but students will be able to
create one using their own intuitions, and building on the other
structures presented. It can be created by using two lines, a vertical
line with a range from "high" to "low" that
measures level of emotion or action in the story, and an intersecting
horizontal line, with a range from the " beginning" to
the "end" of the story that measures the progression of
time in the story as the actions occur.
THE WOMAN AND THE TREE CHILDREN
(Abridged Version)
Once there was a woman who had grown old and whose days had been
filled with trouble. "Why have I had so many problems and troubles
in my life?" she said to herself.
She thought and thought. "Perhaps it is because I did not have
a husband and did not have children."
She decided to go to the medicine man and ask him to give her a
husband and children. [End Episode 1]
The medicine man lived deep in the forest beneath a giant tree and
it took the woman many hours to reach him.
"I have had a very unhappy life," she explained to the
medicine man. "I think it is because I did not have a husband
and children. So I have come to ask you to give me a husband and
some children."
"I cannot give you both," he answered. "You must
choose one or the other."
The woman thought for a long time. Finally she said, "Children."
"This is what you must do. Take some of your cooking pots into
the forest until you find a fruit-bearing sycamore tree. Fill the
pots with the fruit, leave the fruit-filled pots in your house and
go for a walk."
"That is all?" the woman wanted to know.
"That is all," the medicine man said. [End Episode 2]
The woman did exactly as the medicine man had told her. She cleaned
her pots until they shone like stars. Then she carried as many as
her arms could hold into the woods until she came to a fruit-bearing
sycamore tree. She climbed the tree and picked the fruit and filled
her pots. The pots were very heavy but she carried them to her house
and set them inside. Then she went for a walk until the sun began
to set.
She returned to her house. As she came close, she heard voices,
children's voices. She hurried along the path and there, the yard
of her house was filled with happy children playing with one another.
When she walked into her house, she saw that the children had swept
and cleaned the floor, washed and dried all the dishes, made the
bed and brought the cattle in from the field. The woman was very
happy. [End Ep. 3]
Many months passed and the woman and the children lived peacefully
together. Then, one day, something happened. It does not matter
what. It was nothing important. Perhaps the woman had not slept
well the night before, and was feeling tired and irritable that
day. Perhaps something she had eaten was hurting her stomach.
In any event, one of the children did something—laughed too
loudly for the woman's ears, dropped a dish or a glass and broke
it, or something else. The woman yelled at the child.
"It is no wonder you did that. You are nothing but a child
of the tree. You are all nothing but children of the tree! One can't
expect any better from children born out of a tree."
The children became very quiet and still and did not say a word
to the woman. Later that day the woman went to visit a friend. That
evening when she came home, the children were not there. The house
felt empty and lonely, and the woman cried and cried and cried.
The next day the woman went to the medicine man and asked him what
she should do. He said he did not know.
"Should I go back to the fruit-bearing sycamore tree?"
she wanted to know. The medicine man shrugged and said he did not
know what she could do.
The woman returned to her home and washed all the pots and carried
them to the fruit-bearing sycamore tree. She climbed the tree and
reached to pick the fruit.
But the skin of the fruit parted and revealed eyes, the eyes of
the children. They stared at the woman and their eyes were filled
with tears. They stared and stared until the woman climbed down
from the tree and returned to her home.
And she lived in sadness for the rest of her life. [End Episode
4]
NARRATIVE COMPREHENSION
STUDENT ASSIGNMENTS FOR NARRATIVE STRUCTURAL ANALYSIS
Assignment #1. Create a Conceptual Map of the story using the narrative
elements of Character, Theme, Plot, and Setting. Fill in as much
detail as you can in each sub-section of the graphic in order to
make the meaning of the various components clear to your students.
Assignment #2. Construct a Character Weave. You may use the same
categories as the ones that appear in the sample (character's physical
appearance, behavior, feelings about self, and feelings about others),
or you may create new ones.
Assignment #3. Draw a Story Graph. Be sure your graph represents
the beginning, progression, and end of the story, that it reflects
the various levels of emotional intensity that the characters display,
and that you indicate what events precipitate the rise and fall
of their emotions (not illustrated).
Assignment #4. Design an Episodic Analysis Figure. First, decide
how many episodes there are, and where they occur. Fill in the "Challenge,
Emotion, Action, and Outcome" cells for each episode of your
figure with real text, in order to demonstrate that a narrative
episode is a conceptual unit incorporating these four chunks.
EXPLANATION OF NARRATIVE STRUCTURES
The Conceptual Map (Figure 1) represents the gestalt of narrative
text structure in that it highlights the primary "design"
elements of narratives--that of character, theme, plot, and setting,
with accompanying details.
The Character Weave Structure (Figure 2) reflects the horizontal
and vertical interlacing pattern of the loom and serves as a metaphor
for analyzing characters and laying out their characteristics in
a matrix.
The Story Graph (not illustrated) uses undulating lines to represent
the levels of action and emotion found in a story from the beginning
to the final resolution.
The Episodic Analysis Chart (Figure 4) reflects the concept that
each episode in a story has its own internal integrity in that it
is composed of a problem or challenge met by the response of an
emotion, and followed by an action and a final outcome, only to
begin the cycle all over again in the next episode.
Characters Theme(s) Plot Development Setting
Old WomanMedicine ManTree Children Don't take things for grantedEasy
come, easy goThe wound from a fool's word cannot be healedEvery
action has a positive or negative reactionGuilt and EvilExploitation
and UnforgivingnessIndifference(Compare with Hansel and Gretel,
Old Woman in the Shoe, Snow White, The Talking Eggs, Toads and Diamonds,
etc. Sad old woman goes to Medicine Man seeking a husband and children
to make her happyShe chooses childrenMedicine Man tells her to go
to the sycamore tree and pick fruitShe does as he says, and children
show up in her houseOld woman is happyShe yells at the children,
and they disappearShe returns to the Medicine Man for help, but
gets noneShe goes back to the tree, and tries to pick the fruit
againBut sees the children's tearful eyesShe then lives in sadness
forever Old Woman's HouseForestSycamore TreeMedicine Man's House(Magical
and Timeless)
Figure 1: Conceptual Map of "The Woman and the Tree Children"
| Characters |
Theme |
Plot Development |
Setting |
| Old Woman |
Don't take things for granted |
Sad old woman goes to Medicine Man seeking a husband and children
to make her happy |
Old Woman's House |
| Medicine Man |
Easy come, easy go |
She chooses children |
Forest |
| Tree Children |
The wound from a fool's word cannot be healed |
Medicine Man tells her to go to the sycamore tree and pick
fruit |
Sycamore Tree |
| |
Every action has a positive or negative reaction |
She does as he says, and children show up in her house |
Medicine Man's House |
| |
Guilt and Evil |
Old woman is happy |
(Magical and Timeless) |
| |
Exploitation and Unforgivingness |
She yells at the children, and they disappear |
|
| |
Indifference |
She returns to the Medicine Man for help, but gets none |
|
| |
(Compare with Hansel and Gretel, Old Woman in the Shoe, Snow
White, The Talking Eggs, Toads and Diamonds, etc. |
She goes back to the tree, and tries to pick the fruit again |
|
| |
|
But sees the children's tearful eyes |
|
| |
|
She then lives in sadness forever |
|
Figure 2: Character Weave of "The woman and the Tree Children"
| Character Role |
Qualities |
Feelings about self |
Feelings about others |
| Woman: Old To find happiness |
Assertive, resourceful, trusting, Selfish, impatient, sharp-tongued |
Self-pitiful, Lonesome, Sad, Overjoyed, Irritable, Discontented,
Regretful, Despondent |
Pride and happiness (in her children)anger (with them)frustration
(with the Medicine Man) |
Tree-Children: Young
To be good, dutiful children |
Helpful, Cheerful, Sensitive, Victimized |
Content, Peaceful, Playful, Responsible, Sad, disappointed |
Goodness (towards the old woman) |
| Medicine Man: AgelessTo help the woman find happiness |
Magical, Wise, Instructive, Facilitative, Limited, Stumped |
Helpful, matter-of-fact, neutral |
Indifference (towards the old woman) |
Figure 3: Episodic Analysis of "The Woman and the Tree Children"
| Challenge |
Emotion |
Action |
Outcome |
| Episode 1: To find happiness |
Sadness |
Decides to seek help from Medicine Man |
Goes to see Medicine Man |
| Episode 2: To try and get a husband or children |
Happiness, Relief |
Does what Medicine Man tells her |
Goes to the sycamore tree |
| Episode 3: To complete tasks from MM in order to get children
|
Determination |
Cleans pots, picks fruit, leaves them under the tree, and
goes for a walk |
Comes home to children! |
| Episode 4: To adapt to life with children |
Happiness, Contentment, Frustration |
Yells at children |
Children return to the tree from which they came |
| Episode 5: To try and get back the children |
Franticness |
Goes to the sycamore tree |
Does not succeed in getting the children back |
| Episode 6: To live once more without children |
Regretfulness, Sadness |
Cries and cries |
Lives a sad and lonely life forevermore |
NARRATIVE COMPOSITION
The four strategies discussed above provide an excellent scaffold
for student writing. For example, using the Conceptual Map (Figure
1) as a guide, students could write a short but comprehensive essay
about the story. In addition to discussing the characters, theme(s),
plot development and setting, they could write about the story's
connections to their personal world and their larger world experiences,
and to other texts that they have read.
Again, using the Character Weave (Figure 2) as a guide, students
could write a detailed critique of the role, function and effect
of characters in a narrative. This assignment could help them gain
the important insight that as the vehicle for developing theme,
characters are one of the enduring facets of a good narrative. More
capable students could be allowed to come up with their own categories,
or include additional ones, such as "Symbolism." Students
could also use the Weave as an instructional aid in the process
of composing their own character portraits in creative writing.
The Weave encourages students to investigate characters in a narrative
more closely than they had done before, and to reflect on their
depth and complexity.
The Episodic Analysis structure (Figure 3), could serve as the scaffold
for writing a detailed summary of the story. Teachers could use
it as an heuristic for helping their students understand that the
narrative episode is a conceptual chunk, a series of events that
occur as part of a larger sequence between the "initiating
problem" and final "resolution" of a story. Students
will come to understand that the episode acts as the receptacle
for dramatic action and character involvement in a story. This is
an important discovery which would later feed into students' own
creative writing activities. Teachers should understood, and teach
their students, that there is not a fixed number of episodes in
any given story. Based on their intuitions and growing knowledge
of story structure, students could learn to articulate and defend
their own decisions about episodic breaks in a story.
Finally, teachers could use the story graph to help their students
track the development of plot, and ultimately to remember the importance
of this feature as they create their own stories. The story graph
demonstrates the build-up to a climactic peak, and the subsequent
denouement that are the hallmarks of successful narratives.
Teacher modeling, direct explanation, peer collaboration, scaffolded
instruction, and metacognitive strategies must become not only workplace
buzzwords, but functional tools that support real communication,
learning, and understanding, especially in classrooms where literacy
learning takes place amidst a backdrop of linguistic and cultural
diversity. It is a truism of education that students learn better
and become more engaged when they feel competent to handle the assignments
and tasks set before them. This module has explored simple but powerful
ways to help teachers achieve this goal when teaching narrative
appreciation, comprehension, and composition. However, the strategies
and techniques presented here are not intended to act as a panacea.
It is not the case that having used the narrative structures recommended
here, students will know all they need to know in order to understand
narratives. But it is the case that they will have the requisite
tools to help them interact and engage meaningfully with narrative
texts, and achieve a measure of conceptual clarity and understanding
whether reading on their own for pleasure, or studying and writing
about narratives in alternative school settings. When curriculum
and instruction can combine to promote conceptual growth and metacognitive
development, students begin to feel empowered and achievement becomes
an attainable goal.